Talk:Shiverfur's Fanfic (title unconfirmed)/@comment-27725192-20170711204415

Nice! Firstly, you kind of need to add a new paragraph every time a Character B responds in dialogue, which in this case would be Mistlekit. Second of all, you have two chapter ones XD. Third, are you continuing that first chapter? Because it seems pretty short now but I'm guessing it's a work-in-progress. And finally, I could help you think of a name but I think I'll need more of the story written before I get a general idea of what a working title could be. But great job so far Shiver! :)