Talk:The flowers that bloomed only for you/@comment-27934404-20170810125801

I'll begin with nitpickiness to get it over with :P

There was a slight inconsistency throughout the fanfic - when you referred to the narrator as Your and then you afterwards, but this is not important. The difference between what "you" call Eli and her friends and Them is that one is capitalized, one is lowercased, so it was confusing at those times.

Some sentences were really long and confusing (You smile, you loved your flowers and you loved Her so you were happier than you always were). They were difficult to follow, and sometimes I had to reread them two or three times to understand.

I caught a grammatical error here: You kept on growing the flowers, poppys, roses, daisys that tickle your paws.

(Remember, this is all nitpickiness :P)

Now onto what I liked :P

The fanfic was wonderful, beautiful and in fact, out of this world. The second and third paragraphs you wrote on Him and Her were masterpieces.

(I'm posting this now because I have to reload, I'll add more after reloading)