Talk:Submissions for Kate's Birthday - FANFICTION/@comment-27039035-20151030034703/@comment-33008190-20151030043914

Goodnight Sunny. But I'm glad you liked all the chapters. And your advice was needed. Though Flamefeather will have a different personality than the others. I am only four chapters in, and so far everyone has only had one POV. So of course I wouldn't have much development for characters yet :P And yeah, at first I didn't include Hazelpaw. But then I couldn't resist because I liked her name and look so much, so I had to add her. And I feel like a cheery young apprentice is the perfect match for Flamefeather's character. I don't remember him saying he wanted to be leader. I'll have to check on that XD.

One last thing, or you can answer tomorrow, but, You haven't said much about Brownshade's chaoter. Did you like it? Tell me what I need to improve on plz, I love constructive criticism.

And goodnight once again. I really hope to talk to you tomorrow. I enjoyed this a lot. I finally got to discuss this. It seemed before you read it, no one cared about my stories or noticed they were there. I'm so glad you recognized them and liked them. I'll be sure to write more, and tell you all about them.

Oh--and good news....I created a Fanfiction.net account, so I will up,pad all my stories there. Including the Hawaii, Hannibal and Xander one. (Btw that one is called An Island Of Chaos) I will upload everything over time. Maybe create new stories on there too XD

See ya!