Poolstar’s Choice- Plan

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Rough Draft
Chap 1. Short Introduction to Poolkit and the construction of the new RiverClan camp. She is seen playing with the other kits. She has a dream and a StarClan cat tells her about the Choice. She is confused.

Chap 2. Poolkit becomes an apprentice and on her first outing, two legs are spotted on the territory. They report to Snowstar.

Chap 3. There’s a 2 Moon timeskip and the twolegs have destroyed ¼ of the territory and are scaring the prey. The cats are worried and there is talk about a battle to gain more territory.

Chap 4. Snowstar decided to lead her clan into battle with WindClan

Chap 5. The prey is still scarce and many cats are injured. It’s hard times for RiverClan.

Chap 6. Poolpaw’s first gathering. Tension between WindClan and RiverClan

Chap 7. A cat gets greencough, Snowstar sends a patrol to find catmint near the construction site and they are chased by dogs.

Chap 8. Poolpaw is led through a training session but she can’t concentrate because she’s worried about her clan.

Chap 9. More cats get greencough and Poolpaw sets out on her own to find some. She fails.

Chap 10. Half the clan now has greencough and the cats are very weak. There is a gathering and ShadowClan mentions a greencough outbreak in their camp making the RiverClan cats anxious.

Chap 11. Stormpaw invites Poolpaw for a walk. And they discuss the possible future. Poolpaw realises how comforting Stormpaw’s gaze is.

Chap 12. Tawnyclaw has kits but they die because she is weak and cannot produce milk. A ThunderClan patrol arrives at their camp and the leader, Fernstar speaks privately with Snowstar.

Chap 13. Snowstar sends a patrol with Fernstar’s cats and they visit WindClan. They hear coughing from the medicine cat den and WindClan med Cat is looking very concerned. Fernstar and Snowstar speak with Sedgestar (WindClan leader).

Chap 14. There is a gathering and Nettlestar (ShadowClan leader) doesn’t show up. The ShadowClan cat explains that he is sick and it is agreed that greencough had taken over the whole forest. The leaders and gathered cats debate leaving the territory. It is decided that they leave.

Chap 15. Poolpaw is nervous but Stormpelt tells her everything will be ok. RiverClan meets the other Clans. ShadowClans deputy announces Nettlestars death. They set of towards the Sun Drown Place

Chap 16. The journey. (Rough draft; different dilemmas will pop up)

Chap 17. They arrive at sun drown place and debate where to go now. Tensions are high and they decide to follow a river.

Chap 18. The journey. (Rough draft; different dilemmas will pop up)

Chap 19. They travel through mangroves until they reach a thunderpath. It is inactive. They rest beside the river. RiverClan thinks about what a nice territory it could make.

Chap 20. Snowstar is very weak. The cats explore the area.

Chap 21. Clans decide on their territory and settle in. Snowstar dies.

Chap 22. RiverClan’s new leader is cruel and scares every cat. (I’ll elaborate later)

Chap 23. New leader keeps being bad etc. Stormtail speaks about leaving.

Chap 24. Poolpaw becomes a warrior, Poolsky. And she hears the prophecy again. She now knows what it means.

Chap 25. Stormpelt speaks up and leads a group of cats away from RiverClan and it’s nasty leader. They head towards the mangroves and rest there.

Chap 26. Poolsky is pregnant with Stormpelt kits. Stormpelt becomes the leader of the group and makes Poolsky deputy. They are a rough Clan.

Chap 27. Fire in ThunderClan, the group rushes to help them. Every cat gets out safely and they return back to the mangroves.

Chap 28. Few moon timeskip. Poolsky has her kits, they all die. Stormpelt decides to make the group a clan naming himself Stormstar. Clan doesn’t have a name. There are debates about the name.

Chap 29. On patrol, Stormstar gets hit by a monster. Poolsky runs to him and he tells her that he wants the clan name to be PoolClan, after his most loved cat.

Chap 30. The patrol returns home with the news. Poolsky grieves.

Chap 31. Many seasons time skip. Poolsky is now leader Poolstar and she is watching her clan, explaining how she deciphered the prophecy and how she will never forget Stormstar and hopes PoolClan will live on and so so on. (Kinda like the last chapter in Bluestar’ s Prophecy)

THE END.

Copy Draft
Chap 1. Short Introduction to Poolkit and the construction of the new RiverClan camp. She is seen playing with the other kits. She has a dream and a StarClan cat tells her about the Choice. She is confused.

Chap 2. Poolkit becomes an apprentice and on her first outing, two legs are spotted on the territory. They report to Snowstar.

Chap 3. There’s a 2 Moon timeskip and the twolegs have destroyed ¼ of the territory and are scaring the prey. The cats are worried and there is talk about a battle to gain more territory.

Chap 4. Snowstar decided to lead her clan into battle with WindClan

Chap 5. The prey is still scarce and many cats are injured. It’s hard times for RiverClan.

Chap 6. Poolpaw’s first gathering. Tension between WindClan and RiverClan

Chap 7. A cat gets greencough, Snowstar sends a patrol to find catmint near the construction site and they are chased by dogs.

Chap 8. Poolpaw is led through a training session but she can’t concentrate because she’s worried about her clan.

Chap 9. More cats get greencough and Poolpaw sets out on her own to find some. She fails.

Chap 10. Half the clan now has greencough and the cats are very weak. There is a gathering and ShadowClan mentions a greencough outbreak in their camp making the RiverClan cats anxious.

Chap 11. Stormpaw invites Poolpaw for a walk. And they discuss the possible future. Poolpaw realises how comforting Stormpaw’s gaze is.

Chap 12. Tawnyclaw has kits but they die because she is weak and cannot produce milk. A ThunderClan patrol arrives at their camp and the leader, Fernstar speaks privately with Snowstar.

Chap 13. Snowstar sends a patrol with Fernstar’s cats and they visit WindClan. They hear coughing from the medicine cat den and WindClan med Cat is looking very concerned. Fernstar and Snowstar speak with Sedgestar (WindClan leader).

Chap 14. There is a gathering and Nettlestar (ShadowClan leader) doesn’t show up. The ShadowClan cat explains that he is sick and it is agreed that greencough had taken over the whole forest. The leaders and gathered cats debate leaving the territory. It is decided that they leave.

Chap 15. Poolpaw is nervous but Stormpelt tells her everything will be ok. RiverClan meets the other Clans. ShadowClans deputy announces Nettlestars death. They set of towards the Sun Drown Place

Chap 16. The journey. (Rough draft; different dilemmas will pop up)

Chap 17. They arrive at sun drown place and debate where to go now. Tensions are high and they decide to follow a river.

Chap 18. The journey. (Rough draft; different dilemmas will pop up)

Chap 19. They travel through mangroves until they reach a thunderpath. It is inactive. They rest beside the river. RiverClan thinks about what a nice territory it could make.

Chap 20. Snowstar is very weak. The cats explore the area.

Chap 21. Clans decide on their territory and settle in. Snowstar dies.

Chap 22. RiverClan’s new leader is cruel and scares every cat. (I’ll elaborate later)

Chap 23. New leader keeps being bad etc. Stormtail speaks about leaving.

Chap 24. Poolpaw becomes a warrior, Poolsky. And she hears the prophecy again. She now knows what it means.

Chap 25. Stormpelt speaks up and leads a group of cats away from RiverClan and it’s nasty leader. They head towards the mangroves and rest there.

Chap 26. Poolsky is pregnant with Stormpelt kits. Stormpelt becomes the leader of the group and makes Poolsky deputy. They are a rough Clan.

Chap 27. Fire in ThunderClan, the group rushes to help them. Every cat gets out safely and they return back to the mangroves.

Chap 28. Few moon timeskip. Poolsky has her kits, they all die. Stormpelt decides to make the group a clan naming himself Stormstar. Clan doesn’t have a name. There are debates about the name.

Chap 29. On patrol, Stormstar gets hit by a monster. Poolsky runs to him and he tells her that he wants the clan name to be PoolClan, after his most loved cat.

Chap 30. The patrol returns home with the news. Poolsky grieves.

Chap 31. Many seasons time skip. Poolsky is now leader Poolstar and she is watching her clan, explaining how she deciphered the prophecy and how she will never forget Stormstar and hopes PoolClan will live on and so so on. (Kinda like the last chapter in Bluestar’ s Prophecy)

THE END