Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-24038939-20160228230814/@comment-27974279-20160316034717

Your character sounds cool! Just a quick question though... I noticed that she's only five moons old, yet you state that she had 'stalked the clan for many moons before joining'... I think yuou might want to make her a bit older if that's the case, because I don't think a kit would be able to have the mindset to stalk the clan, and she would only have been stalking the clan for a moon or less, because she wouldn't be able to survive on her own for long... Sorry, I'm not trying to be rude or tell you how to make your character, but just a helpful tip for more detailed character development!

~Today