Thread:EosOfTheDawn/@comment-27172956-20161022153625

I know I've taken 500+ years on this collab. Feel free to kill me at any time.

As I've written, deleted, and rewritten it, I've noticed one common error.

Information overload.

There's many things I need to establish in the first chapter, and the writing feels more like a research paper than it does fanfic. Everything is jumbled and confusing, and that's never a good sign.

So, I was thinking I could write a prologue of sorts, introducing the world/characters/conditions. We have that starting off the fanfic, then the first chapter with its Official First Chapter Business.

Thoughts? 