Talk:Haunted Dreams/@comment-27725192-20170222020643

Nice job! I love how you weaved the mystery into the story and the repetition of "Because he is the one who haunts my dreams." adds to the spooky effect. You've really done well! One concern is...I don't really understand what is going on beside something happened between this cat and her mate that resulted in him killing her, so maybe elaborate on it sometime in the story? Otherwise, great job!