Board Thread:Fading Futures - Main Roleplay/@comment-27255507-20180811212128/@comment-27038933-20180831043828

(look there's several problems with Coldice and his bunch showing up and 'saving everyone' first of all it makes those who have taken over seem weak. Second, it defeats everyone else's efforts. Forget the apprentices struggling to dig a tunnel, forget Jetclaw, Houndblaze and Witnerwhisper slinking off as best they can, Coldice and his bunch are here to save the day.

Plus you don't do anything to establish their arrival.

It'd be one thing if the DF trainees were wailing on Coldice as they dragged him out of the territory and then the Blood wolves came in and got him out before he could take significant damage, the blood wolves wouldn't be close to camp suddenly immediately. Coldice wouldn't be beating off cats who have been trained as warriors, and trained in the DF easily, and they wouldn't make all the tension suddenly dissipate because the Blood wolves are here to save the day)