Thread:Winterwhisper432/@comment-25355644-20161222153710

I'm so sorry, I've been going in circles all morning trying to edit it. Would it be too much for me to ask for you to redo the beginning? He was in Tigerclaw's fury, which makes his sister's first-series appearance valid, but it means we'll have to add several more scenes in, to fit in the first series and the second, such as tigerstar's rule, the Great Journey etc. I can do it, but it would result in the chapter being considerably more mine than yours, and I don't know how you'd feel about that. By my calculations he must have been born just after Yellowfang left ShadowClan, so he would have lived through Brokenstar's rule, probably become a warrior then so he's more likely to have got his scar in training or with them driving out WindClan or something. He has to be a warrior by the time Tigerstar gets to ShadowClan, which would make sense if he was made one a few moons early by Brokenstar. Then his sister needs her first litter etc. Basically there's a heck of a lot more to his story than either of us realised, and I can put it all in if you want me to but I'd prefer to leave it to you since it's your chapter. So yeah. Please help me! 