Talk:Illusions/@comment-27725192-20170221222545

This is phenomenal, Wollow. I've actually considered Clan life as repetitive and wondered why no warrior ever saw it the same way. You've created a realistic point of view. I love how you worded it so the readers could feel the pain and melancholy the narrator feels.

In the beginning, it was gloomy, the middle was hopeful and the end was crushing. All in all, it's beautiful and I hope you do write more fanfics (and don't call them trash!)