Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-27774016-20160905021629/@comment-27038933-20160916162826

(I would like to weigh in but I'd pretty much just reiterate what emb said. To be honest I don't like the winterkit plot, it tastes too mary sueish, because not only has Winterkit come back from the dead (the only one despite only being a med cat apprentice), he gets to become med cat apprentice again, so basically his death became irrelevant and he gets everything he wants. What I liked about your idea was Winterkit struggling to find his place, because he wasn't able to become a medicine cat apprentice, as Pebblepaw is Thistletuft's apprentice.)

Burningstar winced, "I see, I will have to check on her later and speak to Thistletuft about her future," She murmured. Then she turned to Bluepaw, "I see, until the smoke clears we will remain here then," She studied the forest from afar, "If it looks less smoky tomorrow, I'd like you to take a patrol and assess the damage Leafwind," She meowed.

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Jetclaw padded up to Flowerpaw, "Flowerpaw!" She meowed nudging her apprentice with her nose, "I'm so glad to see you made it!" She said with a purr.

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Fastfire padded into the nursery, "Hey have you seen-" He trailed off when he saw his brother curled up beside Moonwing. The tabby tom lifted his head and looked at his brother curiously.

"What is it Fastfire?" Speedhawk asked.

Fastfire chuckled, "Nothing bro, was just looking for you, wanted to make sure you weren't walking around with that bad shoulder of yours. But I think that sticking by your kits and mate would be enough to keep you from walking around,"

Speedhawk purred rubbing his head against Moonwing's, "I'd remain here with her forever if I could." He meowed, "Nothing makes me happier,"

Fastfire purred, "I'm glad to hear that, I'll go see about getting you both some freshkill." He said before trotting off.

"Pick out something plump for Moonwing, she's got several mouths to feed you know!" Speedhawk called after his brother who waved his tail in understanding.