Talk:The Death of the Stars/@comment-27725192-20170711204028

PROLOGUE

Woah, I love the setting of this! It's not usual or ordinary as typical Clan stories but you incorporated a new unique concept into it. I do wonder what the Aurora Barrier is for. The concept of the stars is amazing too! So each cat in this Clan/organization/not sure what to call it has a star signifying themselves? And I have a hunch that Wispstar's addition to the barrier was to make it stronger so the Dark Forest could not come through. I also wonder why Lightriver is more important than Wispstar - he's the leader, right? Or was that his opinion as Lightriver is supposedly his mate?

CHAPTER ONE

So my guess was right! The barrier is stronger now but I wonder how Servalkit knew and what her gift is. Hmm I have another speculation - will Servalkit become MCA because of this gift of hers? She was talking to Silentmist, the medicine cat so I believe that she'll become an MC one day.

Great story so far! I'll edit this comment once Chapter One is completed so you can see my opinion of the rest of it. Keep going! :D