Talk:The Hero/@comment-27934404-20170207082222

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First off, you should really continue this. It looks interesting, and I'm wondering how Skystripe will be dealt with. It would help if you put a space after each period, though. The paragraphs would be easier to read that way, but meh. I'm not a neat freak.

Roseweed seems mysterious...I can't really think of any reasons why, but the best explanation I can think of is that she's a reincarnation.

Why is Skystripe so cruel to Thornpaw, and why is he a mentor in the first place? Shame on him! >:(

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In conclusion:

I'd give this a 15/20 rating because it's incompleted, so there's less to point out. Seems twisted, right? Well, anyway, please keep writing this. It's interesting.