Talk:Drizzlelight's Story/@comment-26053883-20170722150526

I'm going to START with the nitpicking to get it over with

Whenever someone new talks, you put it on a new line. There were a few typos and tense changes (not using past tense like the rest of the story)

The introduction was really interesting! Everyone but Drizzlekit being dead took me by surprise. It's a bit cliche, with a forbidden couple, a blind kit who becomes a medicine cat, and a prophecy, but that could all change by he end. The prophecy was a bit obvious as well, but we don't even know what the danger is yet, so it didn't give away too much.

Drizzlekit actually wanting to be a medicine cat is something that's rarely in the books, which I like. We don't know much about the Clans' world here, and I wonder if they have any new and exciting traditions. It's all very interesting and I hope to see more!