Talk:The Hidden Army/@comment-27934404-20170110024046

I like all of the chapters, including the new one. These characters haven't been shown much in the series, so this makes how I look at them different, somehow. The character development is great and I only spotted a few minor mistakes.

The deaths and betrayals were well-written and detailed. I'd say Sunstrike's moved me the most. There were some parts that were confusing and difficult to understand that could be fixed, but they're no big deal. The chapters were the perfect type of dark to go with the Dark Forest.

Great job, both of you. And please continuing writing this. How many chapters will there be?