Thread:StormyLily62/@comment-27669385-20170927025454/@comment-31909027-20170929210448

I agree with you on that! :) It wassss.  Next time I'll send a picture so we can eat it together  . . . . kinda. :P

Alright: Here's what they said, more or less. They said that they kinda had a hard time finding points - like, what's the point that starts the story off and stuff. We're givin until next Friday to polish it up, and then he will read the whole thing and tell us about it, not just skim through it.