Thread:12Blueheart/@comment-32268344-20180117183411/@comment-33066989-20180117210012

Well, here are some of what I've noticed:

A lot of you characters talk about how wise Coldice is for his age, and how amazing he is, you might want to cut some of that out. You might also want to make your characters socialize with RP characters that aren't your own. Maybe have Buddypaw start his own life as well. Even if you miss your friends, you still need to move on in your life and not try to drag people with you because you want to go back to your old life. I mainly suggest to stop giving your characters praise, and maybe not make them so defiant all the time. I could think of other stuff, if you want.