Talk:Cranberry Kitty/@comment-27689452-20170323233737

The over-the-top actions of the characters and exageration of the way you word things all ties into to making this an over-all interesting and hilarious fanfiction! The time skips are great, and I love how Cranberry Kitty was such smooth talker, it really fits with his player personality. Wollow's randomness and sass are great too, but I'm not sure she would've cried in a situation like this. I can't wait to read the rest of the series to see if she comes back to kick-tail, or mends her relationship with Cranberry Kitty.

(also, I'm sorry for being late.)