Talk:Submissions for Kate's Birthday - FANFICTION/@comment-27039035-20151030003450/@comment-33008190-20151030031415

Ok, this sounds weird, but my book messed up so...

It is about to different guys with opposite personalities. The setting is Hawaii, and the city of Maui. These two have a small past, and it ended up with one of them going to Jail, sentenced for 4 years. But the books follows the man in jail, named Hannibal, who has been fed up, and wants revenge.... He breaks out of prison, and is running around Hawaii, chasing down the man who put him in prison. He lured Xander (the other main character who out him in prison) to hAwaii with plane tickets, giving Xander an anonymous letter, and XANDER took it as a vacation to go on with his friends. So meanwhile, Hannibal set up a trap on a plane for Xander, that puts him I. The Maui hospital. After, he checks into a hotel with his friends and has normal life. Meanwhile, Hannibal is running around Hawaii, and finally reaches Maui. He stalks through alleys, avoiding cops or people, and searches for Xander at every hotel, where he guesses he would be.And one problem occurs. After many tries, Hannibal goes to one hotel, asks the lady if Xander Jackson is there.......and she replies yes. So Hannibal is in the building with the man he wants revenge on. And that revenge is death.

Sound good!?