Talk:Submissions for Kate's Birthday - FANFICTION/@comment-27039035-20151030003450/@comment-27039035-20151030032234

I turned 15 in July!

And, yes, that sounds good! I'd consider changing the name Hannibal, for sake of it being an already well-known fictional character, unless you chose it for that reason on purpose. How much of this manuscript have you written? It's intriguing. You really made me wonder as to what happens once they're in the same hotel! :)