Talk:Prophecy of Two/@comment-28650617-20170322045903

Like Rainy said, your plotline has a great concept, but it's a bit confusing since it's mostly dialogue. For a fanfiction to make more sense, you need to have some narration of sorts. If you prefer this writing style, I'd recommend script writing. I think you'd be really great at it! I could show you how to write scripts if you don't know how already/if you are interested. :)

I found a typo in the Prologue: " Rosefall got angry. "But it;s a kit! I can't believe you woild say that, my sister!"